Not ready for lyrics I don't think.
Well for lyrics the song needs to be more
structured. Verse chorus verse is it a good line up. Try getting the verse its own rhythmic pattern, then one for the chorus too. And try changing the harmonic rhymthm (beats per chord change).
Very little indeed.
Ya know I like little short loops like this. Always good for a movie. (no I don't make flashes) Good work.
wtf!
Haunted circus music? It made me think of that part in Pee Wee's big adventure. Though its pretty much the same style as most of your other songs I've heard, I like it.
I should've done this in my comment spot, but if you notice the title is stands for Long Hard Road out of hell, by marylin manson. I say cover, no remix, because the way I did it is more like a cover having my own flavor to it and instrumental as well.
ya know....
... this sounds alot like the 'why do you hate me' song. It has very little activity, not much of a beat... and practically no melody. (I don't mean it in a harsh way) I suggest trying to get a real melody going, more of a moving beat, more bass, and maybe some supporting lines.
Thank you for the honest feedback. You're right, it needs more structure and a better flow, unfortunatly at the time I was using the demo version of FL studio and lost all my old stuff so I'd have to recreate this from scratch. Oh well, I'm working on newer stuff.
interesting expression...
This music is kind of.... well I don't know. Its not dark enough for goth but its not whatever else for sad music. I don't know...
I know what you mean. I had lyrics for it that would have made it much better but at the time I didn't have a mic so... Anyway, I lost all my old files (pre 2008) in a crash, so I can't go back and fix them. Thanx for the input. I like honesty.
More straight 10's. :p
You wanted comments on the style, so I'll give them to you.
I really like what you did here. There were parts in the song I thought it was going to go into victorious fanfare, but then it went back into its gothic sound. Definetly a 'tainted' melody. Also the
adding and removal of the percussion made a nice effect, that of building momentum or energy then suddenly losing it. The strings gave it alot of tension, and then again it was more relaxed. This song definetly lives up to the title, very good stuff here man.
Incredible.
I've never given any song straight tens, but this one deserves it! This is a superb piece you have made, good enough to be in the movies I'd say.
You have to tell me, what program did you use to make this?
up YOURS!
I wasn't expecting this to be good, but it really was. Crazy guitars and a nice beat! This is music they flip ppl off too. haha. Good job.
LOL no, up YOURS! your REVIEW! thats cool.
Well the truth about this is well I do a little pro-wrestling in local bars, in fact Im about to get into my first matchup soon against this guy named Professor Allen. This is the song I will use to come out to, as for when I hit the big times (if I ever do)
Thnx for an honest review man!
Awesome!
I like the synth that played the melody. Sounded like the original zelda. It mixed with the strings very well. Very good stuff here.
thanx much, for an honest review yo!
this is an underworld theme alright
Pretty scary. Reminds me of that game Soul Reaver.
Good job.
Age 36, Male
student
homeschooled
Hernando, MS
Joined on 8/22/04
Still Alone 
Berserker 
Zelda OOT - Song Of Storms 